Raymond Valentino had managed hotels or hotel food and beverage departments for Hilton since 1983. When his position was eliminated at the end of 2008, he took some time off and then started serious job hunting this year.
For his makeover submission, Valentino submitted a two-page resume. At the top was a lengthy section called Executive Profile, followed by job title and job duties for each of his positions in chronological order, with most recent first.
Although Valentino has decades of experience, his resume didn’t sell him effectively. Descriptions were vague and too many details were missing, says Barry Shiflett, who directs career management services at Florida International University’s College of Business.
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Read: “Make sure every line counts,“ an article from the MiamiHerald.com.